I got this as a free ebook on Amazon. The whole idea drew me in right away. Brothers Grimm, modern day and magic, what could go wrong? The general plot was awesome, the execution was really sloppy. The story jumped around really fast, the grammar was horrible and the editing was near non-existent. I honestly would be upset if I had spent money on this. It has such potential, I really hope it eventually gets an overhaul. It could be amazing with the right editor.